Rhetorical Response

   When writing my essay I had trouble at first with the introduction and conclusion. In my first rough draft the beginning and ending were about a page each. This made the essay difficult to read. Revising it a second time helped me make the essay a little more interesting. The one on one conference helped because I really didn't know I had that many problems with my first draft. I definetly liked the peer workshop the most though. It helped me understand what others were thinking when they read my article. My group was really helpful. I also liked that I got to have two different opions instead of just one. Another thing that helped me was the lecture on appeals. I used appeals as an argument in the essay, so the in depth detail about the subject helped me produce a better essay.
   I don't have any questions about the next essay. I hope it is going to be more involved than this one. I want to be able to have more of a creative essay instead of an action and response type article. Other then that everything is fine.