Combining the Two Papers

Based on what we learned for the last essay I am going to be using alot of pathos. This is because alot of hope is based on feelings rather than logic or giving credentials to the author. For this paper I am also going to make sure that the word choice is educated but is not super confusing for the reader. Also, in order to make sure that the reader does not get bored and actually wants to finish reading the paper, I am going to try to avoid constant reptition of the same idea and work on making sure that the point of the essay is clear but not repeative. Also for this paper I am going to try and make the paper flow as much as possible because that also makes the reader want to keep reading. The flow of the paper also helps to make the message clear, which is essential in a defintion essay.