Tuesday, October 12, 2010
revision
I believe that a revision on my paper will be necessary because I first of all do not right good papers I tend slack of on my writing. There are a lot of simple mistakes I over see and pay no attention to them. This revision would be good for me in a way that would allow me to become a better writer by seeing my weak points and also give me a boost in revising my papers that in the future will help me out greatly. Its is going to help me out fin
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help me out find the many run on senteces I have and may even help me out on how to keep adding more ideas to my paper to make it even better. I think that the way my organization will also improve by the way im directing it to the audience.
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