Revision

So for this essay, my main thing that I'm working on as I work towards the final draft is just cleaning everything up to make my essay one of the better essays that I've written. All I'm pretty much doing is going through, rewording parts here, taking out pieces, adding more in and so on. This is mainly because my first rough draft was simply a bunch of thoughts thrown together just so I had at least the main idea of what I kind of wanted, down on paper. Now all of it just needs a bit of editing and touch up to become a nice essay. I'm betting that from my first rough draft to my up coming final draft, the overall change will be about 50 percent.