Proposal Concerns

The only concern I have really is that people won't understand my paper is supposed to have a satirical solution. The previous blog we wrote people questioned how this was to work in real life: its not supposed to work in real life. Its satirical. I understand the letter and everything and the media, I'm not exactly sure that what I have is what Forsyth is looking for but I'll show it to a few people and see what they think. That is all.