5-10% Change

For the first paper the only revisions I did were the suggestions from the peer workshop. This time I plan on going through the paper closely and seeing what I can improve on in regards to structure. Some of my paragraphs are a little "wordy", and I will need to go through and edit so the paper has one continuous style. The overall content of my paper is relevant and to the point, all I need to focus on is grammar and structure.