Revision

In the past as far as revision has gone, nothing major has every really had to change. In highschool revision was more fixing typing mistakes and problems with grammer. The only time we ever really looked for bigger picture things was when the essay did not fit the prompt or topic at all. For this paper some of the things that I plan on working on as far as revision goes are making sure the paper flows. My transisition so far seem to be pretty bad, so that is one of the major points I need to work on for this paper. Also for the definition paper I need to work on my introduction. It does not really catch the readers attention, or make the reader want to continue reading and that needs to change. As far as what I have done between the first two papers for revison the biggest thing I did was take out uneccesarry filler information, and add in more essential information and alot more anaylis rather than summary. I would say that my paper is probably going to change about 15- 20% between the first draft and the final draft. I say this because any paper definitly needs work but I feel like i had some good ideas and a good start so it does need to completly change but somethings both major and minor need to change.