Let's make this one better...

This next paper, I really have got to rock it. I really need to spend more time dedicated to it. The revision process will be much more tedious, what I think is good, doesnt quite cut it. So I have already planned and scheduled a trip to the writing center for the day before the paper is due. This will be the last revision done to the paper before I turn it in, hopefully this is more helpful then last time. Also we are doing two peer editing this time which I am really taking seriously. I cant have anymore C papers EVER! Hopefully the people reading my paper will really just tear it apart this time. I need it. Also I have scheduled a meeting with Forsyth and hope that she will help me improve my paper to get it to that coveted A! :)