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When writing this paper, I feel confident in the content, however, it is a bit redundant at times. My revisions will probably change my paper slightly to clean up and make my paper more concise. In revising this paper, I will also focus on paragrph transitions. My previous writing style has basically stayed the same. I do pay more attention to transitions between paragraphs, as I feel this is a weakness in my writing. I have a fair amount of writing experience through work experience. Very frequently I write notes to families, individual learning plans and newsletters for the classroom. In doing so, I have had to pay attention to my voice and make sure it is a professional one.