Tuesday, November 2, 2010
Pretty Proposal
My audience is the president of Zimbabwe. I'm gearing my proposal by telling him why the one-child policy works and I have given him many statistics and facts. I think it important to gear my proposal in a persuading and convincing way so that the president understands that starvation is very severe and deadly. He then will consider the policy and learn that with less born into this world less will suffer from starvation and malnutrition.
1 comments:
It is clear that your proposal is directed towards the President of Zimpbabwe. There are, however, a few sentences or phrases that should be more formal.
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