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Between the first two papers, my rhetorical analysis paper need the most work due to the fact that I seemed to ramble and not make my point clear. Through significant revision I can make my definition argument the best, because I have a lot of facts and points that I didn't make that would make the paper better. To revise this paper I would go over the techniques and tricks on the Purdue Owl and have people, with no connection to me, go over the paper.