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I think the paper that needs the most work is my definition analysis, I thought that I did a really good job revising, however, it came to my attention that I lost sight of all the bigger things that needed to be done. For example, I used first person in my paper, big NO-NO! I think that I can make the best revision on this paper because I was really into it and had strong feelings about what I was writing. Besides incorporating your comments, which I will do for sure, I will go back to the writing center and make sure that all the grammar and punctuation is perfect, as well as making sure I cover what I am supposed to, instead of writing about what I want to.