Revision for Portfolio

I think that my rhetorical analysis paper needs the most work. The reason that I think it needs more work than my definition argument is because I put less time into, but also because I had not writen a paper in a while. Another reason that I think this paper needs more work than my definition paper is because I had never written a paper for college and did not know what was expected and what was different than the papers I had written for highschool. However I think that I could make my defintion paper the best with significant revision because it was already pretty good, but with some major changes it could be alot better. In order to revise my paper I think i will go back and make sure that every sentence is good and can stand on its own as well as making sure that it all flows together to make a strong paper.