Revising paper

     I think the paper I am going to revise is the definition arguement. Even though I got a better grade on this paper I felt like it needed more work. It could have had more of a flow to it. The paper (to me) was kind of choppy and didn't make sense through out certain parts of the paper. Through revision I can make the definition paper more interesting and make the learner feel like they read it for a reason instead of feeling like I wasted their time.
    To revise my paper I was thinking about reorganizing the structure and making better transitions. To make the flow more continous. I hope that will make it a lot better.