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My rhetorical analysis needs the most work because I feel that it can be drastically improved. It is too repetitive, informal, and my arguments can be explained more in detail. I will also need to put more counterarguments within the paper as this seems to be one of my greatest issues. For revising my paper, I am planning on going to the writing center and having more of my peers revise it. Having others revise my paper will be useful because they will give me more feedback on what should be changed.