Portfolio!

My rhetorical anaylsis needs the most work by FAR!! I didn't do well on it becasue I had too much summary and not enough analysis! I know I can improve this essay the most. Through the last three papers I have learned how to analyze the work and go in depth. The best way I can revise my paper is to ask why? I need to go back and hilight all of the summary and take most of it out. With the support I give, I need to ask questions, how? why? Things like that. I also need to work on punctuation. The grammar from my first paper was pretty bad so I need to go back and revise that. I know what a comma splice is so that will be the first order of business. Well....that's about it....