making everything better.....!

My rhetorical analysis paper is the one that needs the most work. My honest reason was that it was my first college paper and I had no idea what to expect. I didnt try as hard as I could have and I did not do as well as i would have hoped. I can make the definition argument the best because it is a sort of opinionized paper. I feel like it is a stronger paper and I would be able to make it better through my revisions. Specific techniques that i would use would be to print it out and revise my sentence structure and word structure and see it on paper and proofread it. yeah.....WOO!