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I think my definition argument needs the most work because there is more revising and changing that needs to be done but I also feel like I can make it the best though revision. I feel like i can make it the best because I know what I need to do and revise to make it better. I would go about revising my paper by making my thesis more clear and my argument more refined. These revisions would help my paper by making it clear and concise and easy to understand what my argument is but also what the other side of the arugument is as well. Also it will show why my argument is better than the other more clearly