Tuesday, November 2, 2010

PEERS

My audience is the slacking people of the world. I went to the procrastinators and the people who don't care about hard work or schedules. The specific ways are that I list the schedules and that it will pick up the effiency of the entire world! I explain that people will work harder if there is a reward to get the audience to agree with me. My creative assignment shows the importance of the rewarding behavior and how it will change everybody's efficiency! It is particularly important because I want to show that procrastinating is not the good way to go, but hard work and to set a schedule for yourself brings up the efficiency of the world.

2 comments:

Ariel Smith said...

Who is the audience? Make it much more clear. The letter could be addressed to Business owners, Fortune 500 companies, and even the government.

Lorren Yniguez said...

Good...I'm not sure who the audience is...and I'm not really sure what your paper is about except procrastination. I'm not sure what your point is.

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