Tuesday, November 2, 2010
My proposal
For my proposal I wrote a letter. It is mostly geared to animal lover but I specifically wrote the letter to Ingrid Newkrik, the President of PETA. For the creative side of my proposal I am going to use a poster/brochure. I think this will be most effective when introducing my problem and solution. I do not use pathos like I thought I would but i figure since this is my rough draft I can include more things that I want to . Since my audience is PETA and animal lovers I think it is important to call on them because they are the only ones with power to do something about endangered animals.
4 comments:
I'm not sure that that last part is necessarily true, because many different people in positions of power could really help endangered animals. Also, PETA works more through calling attention to specific issues and gaining the support of other powerful groups, so maybe you could also appeal to other groups as well. The general public could be a good idea, as I think many people would be opposed to the loss of an entire species.
You did address the audience that you thought you would, but I also think that your audience could be the people who are killing the animals because they are the ones that are being punished.
ummmmm...i just read your paper and didn't hear anything about PETA...but maybe i just missed it. You've got good funny ideas in your paper but you need to watch some Animal Planet.
I hate you leo hahahaha
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