Using Feedback!!!

After reading over the comments on my paper, there is definitely things that I can use to make my portfolio better. One of the things that I can use is making a stronger introduction. Having a strong introduction leads the reader to want to continue reading and see what you have to say. Another thing that really needs to be worked on is my punctuation. I really need to work on this before English 2030. One way that I can fix this is by reading my papers out loud and see where I can add necessary punctuation. I can include these ideas in my writers inventory letter as possible weaknesses.