After reading the comments in my proposal, I know which aspects of my writing have improved and which things I still need to work on. One of my greatest issues throughout the semester was maintaining a formal tone. I mention this problem in my Writer's Inventory Letter, but I did not mention that I have greatly improved because tone wasn't a problem in this assignment. What I should mention in my Writer's Inventory Letter is that I should improve my language because I use vague and weak sentences that could be more powerful. I will also mention in my letter that I must also focus on sentence structure because my sentences in my proposal were almost the same length.