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The aspects of my latest paper that need work is organization and audience.

My paper was too informal at times do be geared toward the audience I had intended. I could rewrite some of my paper to make the letter sound more formal. The word choices could be more appropriate for my audience.

The other aspect of my paper that needs work is the organization. The statistics need to be more at the beginning and overall I can improve the organization and structure of the paper.