Revisions for Portfolio

I believe I can do some easy things to get my paper to become more effective. First, I can cut out all uneeded words, replace words with shorter words, and not use unclear diction. Certain words must not be used because they distract the reader from the visuals. These words I am talking about are usually inflated words that really have no definite meaning. When speaking about topics, I will go in detail about what it is that I am talking about. If I do use these broad terms and words, I will make sure that I explain it one or two steps further.