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For my Writer's Inventory letter, I will incorporate the fact that word choice and sentence length are still some of the weaknesses that I walked into class with. I will go back through my revision log to count how many words are in each of my senteces to see if I have enough variation. I will also make sure that my sentence structure is perfect in order for the audience to understand without being confused with the punctuation. The fact that I need to work better on diction ties into the fact that I need to work on my word choice. With working on my word choice and diction, my paper will sound more mature and clear for the intended audience to understand. So....yeah....