what worked and what didn't

I have noticed that from last semesters writing to this new one, that my writing hasnt really improved very much. I still struggle to keep organization in my writing and when i feel like i do have it organized it isn't very much improvement. I guess i can say that i do not feel very confident with my writing and not comfortable at all. I try letting other read my writing so that tthey can grade in on their skills but that still leaves me feeling bad about my writings. I'm not expecting a really good peace to come out of me but to become a writer that feels good about his work. I was able to analyse my genre i chose very well. I knew what ways beer conpanies used in order to manipulate viewers and some of those ways was throughtout humor and women in their commercials. Viewing my creative ads i believe i was able to recreate an ad that would use humor but instead for the beer i used it against the beer and i dont know if that can be really easy to do or a little difficult. Over all I finished the essay but like always I'm unsatified with my essay because either thats who I'm or it is obviouse my work sucks and need pro. help.. :)